Fixed Mindset into Growth Mindset

WALT: apply our knowledge of growth mindset thinking to fixed mindset phrases.
I am trying to add more sentences of growth mindset to fixed mindset phrases.
I am trying to tell people to keep trying and never give up.
I was kind of lazy when I was younger and then when I got older I started thinking about being a responsible person and showing other kids how to be a responsible person. I am sometimes curious of doing new things that is why I keep trying.
I hope you can comment on my work so I can see what I need to work on or to see what I have improved on.
Thank You!