I hope you can comment on my work so I can see what I need to work on or to see what I have improved on.
Thank you!
I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Ms. Komor.
WALT: Write a poem about war and mine is about people who were in the war. |
WALT: Make a poem that is all about war and this is one of mine that is soldier. |
WALT: Write a Cinquain Poem which is all about the war and things that has to do with war. |