Kiwi Can Reflection

I am learning to write about our day at Kiwi can.
The thing that I liked most about our Kiwi Can was that we got to show what happens in our lives and in our homes and I liked that we got to make a skit about what happens in the community.
I hope you can comment on my work so I can see what I need to work on or to see what I have improved on.
Thank you!