Monday, 20 April 2015
Poem-Under The Bed
This is one of my favorite poems because it is funny and I like how the monster said that he wanted to sleep with the little boy, because he was scared.
I hope you can give me some feedback or feed forward so I can see how I am improving on my work or so I can see what I need to improve on.
Thank You!
Haiku Poem- Soldiers
I am learning to create a Cinquain Poem of the war.
I hope you can give me some feedback on how good my poem was or give me some feed forward so I can make a better poem.
Wednesday, 8 April 2015
Tuesday, 7 April 2015
My Movie Hero
I hope you can comment on my special blog post and write what you feel about the great Paul Walker.
He is a true hero.
Oz the great and powerful
Hi guys I am back with another post.
Oz the great and powerful is about a man who worked and lived in a circus, he was a magician but he wasn't a real magician, he was a fraud. People thought he was a real magician until he finished his show. A poor girl on a wheel chair shouted "make me walk." But Oz couldn't so the girl cried. Oz left the stage and then another girl that Oz hardly sees comes to his room and they start talking. He was got up with his cheating. The strong man comes and tries to beat up Oz but he escapes from the man, he goes on a hot air balloon and then he finds himself in the middle of a tornado storm.
He runs away from one thing and fter that he meets a woman, the woman told him "You are the chosen one"
This movie is one of the best I have ever seen. My favorite part was when the good witch made the big smoke and they sent out the scarecrows and the wicked witch sent out the monkeys so the monkeys can destroy the scarecrows but the wicked witch thinks the scarecrows are humans.
The monkeys attacked the scarecrows and then they fell asleep because the field they were fighting at was cursed mostly the roses. The roses makes anything that walks on them sleep.
I would also recommend this movie to you because it is full of adventure and it is full of action and drama.
Thank You!
Oz the great and powerful is about a man who worked and lived in a circus, he was a magician but he wasn't a real magician, he was a fraud. People thought he was a real magician until he finished his show. A poor girl on a wheel chair shouted "make me walk." But Oz couldn't so the girl cried. Oz left the stage and then another girl that Oz hardly sees comes to his room and they start talking. He was got up with his cheating. The strong man comes and tries to beat up Oz but he escapes from the man, he goes on a hot air balloon and then he finds himself in the middle of a tornado storm.
He runs away from one thing and fter that he meets a woman, the woman told him "You are the chosen one"
This movie is one of the best I have ever seen. My favorite part was when the good witch made the big smoke and they sent out the scarecrows and the wicked witch sent out the monkeys so the monkeys can destroy the scarecrows but the wicked witch thinks the scarecrows are humans.
The monkeys attacked the scarecrows and then they fell asleep because the field they were fighting at was cursed mostly the roses. The roses makes anything that walks on them sleep.
I would also recommend this movie to you because it is full of adventure and it is full of action and drama.
Thank You!
Sunday, 5 April 2015
Avatar The Movie
I just watched a movie on Sunday that came up on T.V called the avatar which is about a person who had a twin brother that died and the twin brother had another body controlled by there minds called the Avatar. They are like humans but bigger, stronger and they are more connected to nature. The twin that is alive took over his brothers job and now he has another body.
Well the reason I am telling you about this movie is because it is a sad, cool and touching movie. I tried not to get emotional when the chief of the avatar died while the home of the avatar's were getting destroyed.
This movie is great I recommend this to people who haven't seen this movie.
Watch it, the movie is great. Even though this is an old movie I think that the Avatar is in my top 5 for movies.
Thank You!
Well the reason I am telling you about this movie is because it is a sad, cool and touching movie. I tried not to get emotional when the chief of the avatar died while the home of the avatar's were getting destroyed.
This movie is great I recommend this to people who haven't seen this movie.
Watch it, the movie is great. Even though this is an old movie I think that the Avatar is in my top 5 for movies.
Thank You!
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