I hope you can comment on my work so I can see what I need to work on or to see what I have improved on.
Thank You!
I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Ms. Komor.
WALT: Identify words that describe me I hope you can comment on my work so I can see what I need to work on or to see what I have improved on. |
I am learning to write a book report. I hope you can give me some feedback or feed forward so I can see what I need to work on or to see what I have improved on. Thank you! |
WALT: apply our knowledge of growth mindset thinking to fixed mindset phrases. I am trying to add more sentences of growth mindset to fixed mindset phrases. I am trying to tell people to keep trying and never give up. I was kind of lazy when I was younger and then when I got older I started thinking about being a responsible person and showing other kids how to be a responsible person. I am sometimes curious of doing new things that is why I keep trying. I hope you can comment on my work so I can see what I need to work on or to see what I have improved on. Thank You! |